While i start eating the 32oz bag I remembered the first time i had ever eaten M&M's. The year is 2000 and i am at work with my dad at Sun Microsystems in San Jose. My dad is the head technicnian, so I got to explore from confrence rooms to where the all the technicians gathered at. The first place I would eat this delicious treat was in a gorgeous confrence room. The room was decorated with windows that showed the red and orange sun setting behind mountains in the distance. My dad is a huge fan of candy and M&Ms were his favorite because they were small, addictive, and easy to hide from kids. But on that day he made a mistake that would follow him to this day. He gave us candy.
My taste buds were given a gift with a price. The sensetions my tounge gets from this gift is undescribale, but if you have never eaten one before i will try the best I can. It is like being able to watch a cluster of stars away from the busyness of the city while lying on a warm blanket. But the gift have a price. The price is an after taste so fowl that the consumer will almost egret even taking the first one. The only was to extingish the fowl flame is by eating another one. This is the method Peanut Butter M&Ms use to get you hooked.
I like how this is written. How you describe the conference room could be a little stronger, though. Another thing is capitalization of the word "I". You are very descriptive of the candy and I like that.
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